Comments On Dollar Incident and My Responce

wish I could see it though because I did like the music but felt it was too much in certain parts, I wouldn't have removed it completely. I think that the editing certainly improved the boy's and busdriver's roles/performances; I still like the bus driver and I thought his 'non-acting' acting helped the feel of the movie in the same way the non-professional actors added to the bleak and strange atmosphere of the movie "Bubble".
Hope that helps Thanks! - Mary

Frank Hom a film maker from Los Angeles called me and said he missed the long cuts as he thought the gave the film more tension and missed the dialog I cut out.
On the whole he seemed to think it showed promise and and told me to follow my instincts and stick with it.

Tanya
Told me that the music was too loud (I did another mix and also added more ambient sounds. I also tried to put a bit more space in the cuts.
She liked the story and though it was much improved now that it is finished.

Postal Response:I edited again giving more space and air to the cuts.
I lowered the music and added ambient sound.
I also put in a different take of the babysitter shot.
I edited again (not on group but on single) giving air to some cuts